I promise to wipe that smirk off your face,
Every moment in every way,
I promise to wipe that smirk off your face.
I promise to wipe that smile off your face,
There will be none , not even a trace.
I promise to wipe that smile off your face.
I promise to wipe that grin off your face,
Even your kin, you won’t embrace.
I promise to wipe that grin off your face.
I promise to wipe that laugh from your face,
Be a little brutal, hit you with that mace.
I promise to wipe that laugh from your face.
I promise to wipe that beam off your face,
There’ll be no glory, there’ll be no grace.
I promise to wipe that beam off you face.
Somebody gonna get a hurt, real bad! lol
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Yeah, me.
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Oh really? Ahhh, I was referencing a comedian that came to my mind.
So to understand this poem, is it someone saying it to you? Or is it like you’re going to get hurt in the process of fulfilling your promise?
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Yeah, maybe a bit of both.
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I see. I hope you win in the end lol (if a win is possible). There’s not much I can do from where I am (I think).
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It isn’t about winning. Appreciate your help though, thank you.
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Hm… then how about settle? Yes, there’s a lot I don’t know, so sorry for offending if I have.
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Can’t settle, it’s beyond that. And it’s fine, I’m not offended, I’m thankful that you’re taking interest in this.
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I see… Then I’ll leave it to you.
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Okay, I’m Huddie by they way, nice to meet you.
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You should add a contact page lol, then it’ll be easier for us to chat without having the comments section go crazy
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My mail is guyrex786@gmail.com
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I like crazy anyway.
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Why ?
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Sorry, I got it wrong. Why the “why?”
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Why such a promise ? That was the first reaction when I read the poem. That something very serious must have taken place between the two. Then later on I was wondering why I had posted that question 🙂 because it must be something personal.
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It’s alright, it’s not all that serious, it’s just a bitter piece of writing. The promise goes well with it.
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Powerful gusts of feeling well brought out. Anand Bose from Kerala.
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Thank you very much.
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This rings of wanting to strike out with blame in equal parts with pain.
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Thank you for that again.
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………………. amongst your roses, I picked the thorn; it bled me the most! For me, a lot came out in this…..the venom was clear but as i read the comments….could someone hold so much venom & mean it true? idk
Strong pieces you have, thank you for sharing!
Much Love & Ladybugs!
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Thank you for that. Well, I’ve heard venom can sometimes heal you.
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i have heard the same; once bitten
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Spitting venom is an art.
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So I’ve felt (smirk)
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Oh yeah. That’s what I’ve leant from Bob Dylan.
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